If You Love Me True...

A girl's request for the one she loves to find and bring to her a few "simple" things

Dearest, if you love me true

I have a few little things to ask of you

They are simple, not hard to find

Oh, yes, those few simple things I ask of you:

The hushing embrace of the night

The wisper of the wind

The laughter of the brook

The warmth of the sun

The chill of an Autumn wind

The calm and fierceness of the sea

All I want you to bring to me

Author's Note

Okay, I don't write romantic stuff all that often, so please tell me if it's a total fail. Anyways, it's a girl asking the one she loves to find and give her a few "simple" things. You can look at this as either comedic or deep, depending on how you look at it. Personally, I see it as both, but then again, that's just my view.
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

Ok.. No, you didn't fail in this write :) You've passed and i took this write as a Romantic one, as a comedy, as a depth of the love as well as the true soul of love that asking to bring to someone to you :) That's a nice and a Romantic write, i think my dear frnd cokkiieeee''sssssss become a Romantic writer within some months :) HAHAHAH :)

Nice flow of ink, loved your Imaginary, yeah, it's a deep write and i enjoyed reading this piece. After all i read your write after some months and you know what, i reallly did enjoy reading your this write, you made me happy by dropping such a nice piece here on this site :) Keep writing coookiiieeeeeeee :)1000/100 :)

[CreativeCookie]

I'm really glad you liked it, I wrote that a long time ago, and decided to post it here, no matter how silly it might seem to some!

[Criss ;)]

Your welcome :) Really, tht's great you did decide to post here, i really enjoyed this poem :)
Hahah, no no.. not a silly write, i found it's a good write and a lovable write that's acceptable to everyone :) but only for those who know the true and a goood meaning of love in a true sense :) I liked and loved your this poem much. You're growing now, your poems're gettting some flow :) so, keep it up :)

[Rahman Bin Taleb]

All these are hard tasks to do.But the true lover can do more than these.Your perception is really fantastic