Rain

I love the rain and the peace it brings.

It patters softly

Drip Drip Drip

I sigh in relief at the peace that it brings

Drip Drip Drip

It hits the leaves and rolls, magnifying it and turning them a lush green.

Drip Drip Drip

Everything is reborn

Drip Drip Drip

The grass is moist and smells salty like the sea

Drip Drip Drip

Thunder booms quietly in the background

Drip Drip Drip

I close my eyes and left the water slip over my face like tears of joy

Drip Drip Drip

My skin feels smooth and moist, renewed

Drip Drip Drip

The sky is gray and humid

Drip Drip Drip

All evil is washed away into the depths of the underworld.

Forever lost

Drip Drip Drip.......

Author's Note

Feed back would be nice.

Reviews

[Zombeh]

Great piece, I see from the review below that you did have some errors, but now I see none, or at least nothing major now. I believe this is a very unique piece, I like the way you structured it with the 'Drip, drip, drip' was nice. I got a nice vibe while reading this. Nice job :)

[S. Janszen]

This poem has a lot of potential. However, there are some spelling errors, such as "relif" and "magnifiny." Also, magnify it should be magnifying them or just magnifying. Furthermore, the changing, bright text colors are relatively artistic, though completely distracting from the actual piece.