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A Poem by
onestep
Want
To be loved
Children
Respect
More than on night
To be cherished
To not hurt
To not wonder
To be confident
To live
To not worry
© 2019 onestep
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Bluebird
I was always told those that want dont get but your piece serves to act as a list for human needs.....basic but bold
Posted 5 Years Ago
I was always told those that want dont get but your piece serves to act as a list for human needs.....basic but bold
Rating
/100
John Alexander McFadyen
Quite a stark piece which lacks any real feel for the subject in it's free verse form. Did you mean 'More than one night'? It does encourage the reader to inject their own interpretation in its bare bones simplicity and staccato style.
Posted 5 Years Ago
Quite a stark piece which lacks any real feel for the subject in it's free verse form. Did you mean 'More than one night'? It does encourage the reader to inject their own interpretation in its bare bones simplicity and staccato style.
Rating
/100
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Added on March 13, 2019
Last Updated on March 13, 2019
Author
onestep
TX
Writing
To be lost in you
A Poem by
onestep
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