Out of the Blue

It's too good to be true, that out of the blue
Someone like you has appeared
Your voice is loving, it pushes away
All my hopelessness and inner fear

Yet there is, this one kind of fear
Hey! I refuse to admit that I'm shy
But I choke on my words and pathetically panic
Every time you're nearby

If I ever got, an hour alone
With you sitting right by my side
I'd show you this unrealistic world
My stupid mind has created inside

With the weight of the world
On my weak, brittle shoulders
I seem to manage carrying on
But you give me those, drops of hope
The courage to live and sing along

Oh at night I just cannot sleep,
I think about you as I lay
I keep thinking of ways, in which I can stylishly say
Come and forever stay.

Author's Note

I feel soooooo embarrassed publishing this but I just couldn't help it. :p This is not entirely complete, (at least not for me) I had to stop. I mean I could go on writing this poem forever. But it's gotten long and I thought it would be irritating if it got any longer. Damn, I can be so lame sometimes. :P

Reviews

[Karen]

There's nothing lame about a love poem! Expressing yourself on paper is easier for a shy person than speaking your heart and mind in person. That's why poets are so romantic; it's easier on paper. People have this notion that poets go around and recite their own poems aloud to the person of their affection. In fact, it has been my experience that poets are shy and quiet and reserved. We are mostly expressive in writing than in person. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with us!

[CagedEnigma]

You're welcome, Karen. And what you said is true, it does feel good writing it down. :) Oh and I finished ''Not Sure Yet" haha. Named it His Whispers. See if you like it and thanks for reading this one.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This is love struck poetry... I guess as long as you're willing to let the words out... that's what really matters... in the end...

[CagedEnigma]

Thanks for the encouragement. :)