Shadow

A poem in the eyes of a shadow.

            Who am I? I’m the thing you fear, the one who watches your every move. Me? I’m just like you in looks, but have no color in my flesh or clothes. I move when you do I’m like a mirror only black. I’m a part of you whether you know it or not. So keep playing those games that crush me for you too will have your day when I will crush you. Even though I’m apart of you I am separate, living in my own world, my world of darkness that is opposite to yours. So now you wonder who I am even though I have told you. I am your reflection on the floor, the dark entity that scars you but also your friend. I am your shadow.

Author's Note

This was my first poem ever. I wrote it in 10th grade.

Reviews

[B A S S E M A S H R A F]

wow thats sounds good

you are talented , keep it up :D:D

--bassem ashraf

[Encore]

Very dank and creepy, but captivating. I love it! Good job

[deeps]

I like it very intriquing read.
Well said and pulled me in.
Wonderful write.

[Dante Harper]

This is an interesting read. Pulls the mind away from the self.
"Even though I’m apart of you I am separate, living in my own world, my world of darkness that is opposite to yours."
A fun concept I like to think about like our reflections in the mirror

[Eagle Cruagh]

You had me looking over my shoulder.

This is an interesting, subtle and fun read.

Very well written and it exercises the mind.

My rating---- 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Gabbie]

Haha it's good! Kinda creepy sounding >_>