I Wait Here

I see your face

  in the dark ocean.

  

I hear your song 

   haunting the angry wind.

I find our names 

  carved in a tree.

I wait here for you...

  But you never come.

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wonderfully framed White Feather its really nice I like this line very much "I find our names carved in a tree".

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you, Skyfall! Glad you enjoyed this.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome White Feather :))

[Trace]

Dang it, I hate it when that happens,

Trace

[zainul]

This is a lovely write.
I can imagine how you are engaging yourself to your beloved person.

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you, Zainul!

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Feather!

[Patricia Williams]

This is so deep; I love it. :)
It's sad and nostalgic with a chaotic undertone ("I hear your song haunting the angry wind.").

Keep writing!
~Patricia

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much for your encouraging review, Patricia! You keep writing, too! :)

[Patricia Williams]

You're welcome; and thank you. :)