I Am

I'm a man who would surprise you with flowers on just a regular day
And tell you your beautiful with out make up and on bad hair days
Id make you laugh and smile as much as I can
And hold doors open for you just like a gentleman
I'd be there to listen and hold your hand through the tough times
I'd be your shoulder to cry on and always your valentine
I'd marry you and have as many children as you wanted
Id take care of you when your sick and be a loving father and husband
I'd love you when your old and fat and even become a burden
I would be everything you wanted me to be I would be perfect
I'd be everything you dreamed of but it will never be
because I'm everything you wish you had just not with me

Reviews

[Anjali]

I love this so much! The ending lines I've felt that sometimes too. The rhyming scheme, the emotions, the beauty, and the humour.... Like wow! Loved it so much.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am speechless. This couldn't be more perfectly written. The last line hits hard. I like your thoughts.

[Little Whisper]

I really like your poem. You have conveyed what many feel.