Burning Eye

Burning white eye,
Hanging in the sky.
Scorching the earth below
With it's intense gaze.

The closer it gets,
The more unbearable
This heat.

Scarcely i can
Imagine,
What could be worse
Than the glaring,
Of our firey
Sun.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

As the sun expands... I hope were gone long before (about 4-5 Billion years in the future) ((billion))

I'm a sucker for this type of writing regardless.

(I censor my staff thank goodness)


WE are destined to be mouth raped by a red giant.

have a good day

[H.L. Cerveise]

I liked the poem very much. The stanzas and the flow were good. The imagery is well laid out. I could feel the stifling heat beating me down.

Well done.

[The Poet of Black Wings]

Thank you. Yeah, i always say write about what you hate. That way, the feeling really comes across.