When I Come Undone

When I Come Undone.

 

A gasp of breath,

A stream of tears.

I try so hard to get you,

To understand my fears.

 

A monster inside,

He makes me breath doubt.

I cut him a path,

But he just won’t come out.

 

A broken heart,

Jagged pieces in hand.

I will bleed for you,

If it will make you understand.

 

I don’t want this hurt,

I don’t want this pain.

Still here it lives,

And who is to blame?

 

A bit of trash,

Is what I have become.

This monster will only concede,

When I have come undone.

 

©12-5- 2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Nicely displayed the emotiond of loyality and trust

[AaronFreitas]

This might be my favorite piece from you. I love the imagery and just the thought of having what we perceive as a monster in us that we just can't get rid of. I can definitely relate my friend :) The only thing I did notice was breath should be breathe :) Glad to read your work Nikki :)