Iona Grayling's Vapor Prophet

Iona Grayling's Vapor Prophet

A Poem by Cambion


Look at her, midsection lines blazing

    Heaving prow swollen with glittering ion beams

Her aft sections tight and proud

    Bravely bolstering her posture as she surges into the fray

Battle joined, she calls the hunt with thunder

    Heralding fell sensors' unerring gaze

For none in the skies who've caught her eyes

    Have survived her deadly rays

Look at her, midsection lines blazing

   Heaving prow swollen with glittering ion beams

Her aft sections tight and proud

   Bravely bolstering her posture as she surges into the fray

Upon that shining bridge, tungsten crown of heroism

   Heralding fell sensors' unerring gaze

And none in the skies who've caught her eyes

   Have survived her deadly rays - See more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11831011-Iona-Graylings-Vapor-Prophet-by-Cambion#sthash.wEJyVIjT.dpuf
Look at her, midsection lines blazing

   Heaving prow swollen with glittering ion beams

Her aft sections tight and proud

   Bravely bolstering her posture as she surges into the fray

Upon that shining bridge, tungsten crown of heroism

   Heralding fell sensors' unerring gaze

And none in the skies who've caught her eyes

   Have survived her deadly rays - See more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11831011-Iona-Graylings-Vapor-Prophet-by-Cambion#sthash.wEJyVIjT.dpuf
Look at her, midsection lines blazing

   Heaving prow swollen with glittering ion beams

Her aft sections tight and proud

   Bravely bolstering her posture as she surges into the fray

Upon that shining bridge, tungsten crown of heroism

   Heralding fell sensors' unerring gaze

And none in the skies who've caught her eyes

   Have survived her deadly rays - See more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11831011-Iona-Graylings-Vapor-Prophet-by-Cambion#sthash.wEJyVIjT.dpuf

© 2014 Cambion


Author's Note

Cambion
This was a heavy cruiser spaceship in a story I never wrote. Iona Grayling is the fair-haired and velvet-gloved captain whose experience and charisma allow her to stay on top when the Vapor Prophet's patrols encounter danger.

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Only just noticed the request! The comparison between woman and ship is very graceful. I love the idea of calling the "hunt with thunder", very powerful imagery. Wow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The kick a*s sexy woman with brains and courage.
Love how you've described this scene.
Last two lines are perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 24, 2014
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Tags: poem, poetry, space, spaceship, metaphor, female protagonist

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Cambion
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Amherst, MA



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