Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Kaspar Carr
"

I can't fight this anymore.. It is a losing battle

"
Darkness,
It's black,
Creeping up behind me,
Ready to attack,
Smiling,
While turning my soul black,
Clutches me up,
Drowns me in fear,
Shutting everything happy down,
There is nothing left,
Not even a sound

© 2013 Kaspar Carr


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Kaspar Carr
It has taken me back.

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I see where your going but its a might to hard to port if you take my meaning. This felt natural, but forced in spots. Not to say I don't like the points, just a little wind swept.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on May 7, 2013
Last Updated on May 7, 2013
Tags: dark, horror, creepy, battle

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Kaspar Carr
Kaspar Carr

Anywhere., NC



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Hello, My name is Kaspar I am 20, I live in America, I love poetry and quotes. Happily taken and in love since November 25th, 2010. Never tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footp.. more..

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A Poem by Kaspar Carr