Fighter Withers Slowly

A chant

blood explodes

a blooming rose

as meteor fist

hits mountain nose

 

demons dance as the mob voice chants

and the fighter withers slowly

 

eyes bulge wide

the rising tide

as knuckles rain down

planets collide

 

demons sing as the time bell rings

and the fighter withers slowly

 

God counts ten

and no one wins

as concerned brothers 

come rushing in

 

demon's choir shrieks as life expires

and the fighter withers slowly

 

Reviews

[just is]

God counts ten
and no one wins
as concerned brothers
come rushing in

demons choir shrieks as life expires
and the fighter withers slowly

Love this as well, this is wonderful.
I really enjoy your style.
you have talent.

[Carey Lenehan]

Lovely duality to this... beautifully illustrated without once referring to boxing and so reminiscent of other more natural battles. Fighters and gods... what's the difference? Great dance in the words and lovely pacing in the lines. Good write. XXC

[Kevin Vorshak]

"eyes bulge wide
the rising tide
as knuckles rain down
planets collide"

I like the visuals on this. Again, another writing of yours with smooth flow and good tempo.