'Round and 'Round

'Round and 'Round

A Poem by Captivating Ink
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Dizzy

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The world goes ‘round and ‘round

The ones suffering most never making a sound.

Perhaps they’re too innocent to notice the disaster

Or perhaps they do not care at all, their heart made of plaster.

 

Is that what your heart is really made of, my dear?

As you turned a deaf ear?

You ignored my pleas begging you to stay

And left me standing in the rain with nothing to say.

 

It doesn’t matter anymore, though

As I sit here and watch the blood flow.

My copper liquid intermingles with others

The screams that are piercing are very soon smothered.

 

I miss you, I miss you, I sing with my last breath.

Bet you weren’t expecting this to end in death.

I wasn’t either, I must admit

But it’s easier this way, to submit.

 

The world still goes ‘round and ‘round

Despite the troubling growing mound

Of the people who were left by people

 And gave up, their hearts too feeble.

© 2012 Captivating Ink


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Captivating Ink
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Great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captivating Ink

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like this poem. It's really sad but pretty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captivating Ink

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Very interesting.Very well done. I enjoyed it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captivating Ink

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I really loved this!! in fact I loved it so much I added it to my library!
It's super sad but just superbly real and true. The ryme and rythme fit in superble as well. I rly rly loved the round and round parts they fit in just perfectly to me

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captivating Ink

11 Years Ago

Thank You! :) I'm super glad you liked it!

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Added on September 22, 2012
Last Updated on September 22, 2012
Tags: suicide, loss, blood, the world, continuing

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