The Giving Tree

Sometimes you cling

Onto me,

Grateful to have something

To steady your knees

But after I fix your glasses,

Straighten your tie,

And give you an encouraging pat

You roam off

You come and go

Depends on what you need

Sometimes I feel

All I am

Is a giving tree

Give Give Give

I never take take take

I must rein in

All these feelings

That I make make make

I weep to my Goddess,

She will hear me out

And to Her I am grateful

She I cannot do without

Reviews

[M. Stein]

Ahh, the imagery and emotion in this is wonderful!

[roses101]

I really enjoyed your poem.

[PurpleQuartz]

Great writing with a great strength!

[Sami Khalil]

"You come and go

Depends on what you need

Sometimes I feel

All I am

Is a giving tree




Give Give Give

I never take take take

I must rein in

All these feelings

That I make make make'

I felt the power of those words. I like this idea of a giving tree...Splendid...:)

[Careline]

Aw thank you!!! You're the first person to really review my stuff in months, so please, look through more of my writing and review away!