Unhuman

On Twilight...for those who dont know. And this is actually lyrics but it works as a poem.

Unhuman

I see you... mysterios and alone

With no one to hold

Dangerous is something i can see

Your not human apparently

 

I was always an outcast

Never quite fitting in

Always the last

Seeming for somereason unhuman

 

You look at me

Truth is in your goldon eyes

beneath those lies

And I know all you can be

Even if it proves wrong for me

 

You thirst for my presence

And if you make a wrong move

It can be more than fatal to me...

Your Unhuman

I can see....

 

With your strength and  pale skin

Breaking free of your sins

I like you more than I should

but how can I help it

Im drawn to your look

Drawn to your abnormality

I know your Unhuman

But I wish I could have you

for eternity...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please Review....I don't like it. It dosen't seem to flow the way it should.

Reviews

[Amy]

Amazing.
The words flew off my tongue. x

[J.Black]

Are you kidding?
This could be a great song if you find the proper tone and beat!
I liked it, I also love that it's about Twilight. :)

[Love Struck]

Sounds like something Bella would write...good job =]

[Fire&Ice]

Very basic, but still nice. I love the twilight series, and honestly cannot wait until the movie comes out. "You thirst for my presence" - my favorite line. Write on

[melancholia skies]

On Twilight you say? One of my favorites. I liked the lyric flow, very classy. The whole poem was over-flowing with class, and admiration. Truly a wonderful piece, so enjoyable. Great work. :)