The Angels

May the angels keep you till morning.

may they guide you through the night.

may they comfort all your sorrows.

may they help you win the fight.

may they keep watch on your soul.

may they show you better ways.

may they guard you while you're a sleep.

may they see you through your days.

may they show you new hope.

may they still your every doubt.

may they claim your every fear.

may they hear you when you shout.

may they keep you till morning 

more than this I cannot pray

.and if I ever fail you

 may the angels be there that day....

:)

Reviews

[Aseel]

really nice poem that comfort the person who hear it espicially from a lovable one

just on the line saying ' more than this i cannot pray ' when i was reading it i thought there suppose to be ''if i cannot pray'' to have the meaning you want to make it . or may be yoy didnt put it cause you meant another thing by this ?
and really it was very nice poem good job

[Carl Drake Barnard]

no,thanks for your review though but ''if I cannot pray''doesn't work,i prayed for her safety every night and it wouldn't do well with the end

[Aseel]

aha i got it sorry:) .

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe it's cool no worries :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Very nice and clear style, really enjoyed it

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Awww thanks :)

[Meliss@k]

This isn't a children's poem at all! I would love to hear my boyfriend, father, or husband write a poem like this for me one day. So peaceful and sweet. Loved it!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe you're correct,it was for a special someone i loved :)

[Pryde Foltz]

A poem for your children? Splendid.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Poem for a loved one :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Beautiful poem! I really like it, especially the flow of it. It has a nice message and it is very well written. Keep up with the good work! :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Aww thanks!! to be honest i was hoping you would read it,cause i wanted to share this with you :)read moreAww thanks!! to be honest i was hoping you would read it,cause i wanted to share this with you :)

[UnderCompulsion]

aww you're so nice :) I will :)