Heat Rises

Heat Rises

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett
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At least I can dream :)

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I can hear the sound of his heart 
beating in his chest
It is the sound of life 
playing to its own individual beat and rhythm 

I hear the whisper of my name 
as it flows unbidden from his lips 
It floats across waves of sound 
until it settles into the deep parts of my soul
like a gentle kiss it touches me 
fills me with its warmth 

His love frees me
lifts me up and carries me 
upon winds of change 
into to a future 
I could never have dreamt of 

In his arms 
I am free 
Laughter fills my spirit 
and I overflow with joy 

Finally safe 
in the strong arms of love
I drift away 
on tides of passion 
that enthrall me 

I float upon moonbeams 
as his love penetrates my being
Encapsulating me in waves of delight
taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams 

I am alive in his love 
healed by his kisses
that dance with free abandon 
upon the softness of my skin 

Every cell in my body tingles 
in the beauty of his touch 
Heat rises 
pumping the blood of passion through my veins 

His love engulfs me 
and I melt into his burning flesh 
Melded together as one 
we ride upon waves of ecstasy 

Soaring higher and higher
with every beat of our hearts 
Until we reach a place 
beyond the highest stars  

Then the fire of our passion
burns to embers at last 
and we collapse 
content and at peace 
into the beautiful warmth 
of each others arms 


© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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Beautiful photo and a amazing poetry. Good to desire to dance in passion.
"Every cell in my body tingles
in the beauty of his touch
Heat rises
pumping the blood of passion through my veins "
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines were my favorite. Best poetry is about real love and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I re-read the poem. Photo is beautiful and the words are amazing.
Carolann Dowsett

8 Years Ago

Thank you 😊 Means a lot
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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pure beauty. The wording and flow is so beautiful and peaceful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
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Aly
I loved this.
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful did I meantion. . . beautiful?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Aw thanks so much I'm glad you like it :)
This poem is a recipe for passion. Your diction in this poem is fantastic. I can almost feel so many emotions from this poem. This part here "I float upon moonbeams
as his love penetrates my being
Encapsulating me in waves of delight
taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams" Simply elegance. The attention to detail is wonderful. You're a great writer Carolann

Chaos_Collector

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome
Very sweet, romantic, and peaceful. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Another beautiful poem dear Carolann. I felt a great joy reading this and looking at your photo, I am now compelled to write a poem about your beautiful eyes. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jack :)
first of all, let me say that the photo is stunningly beautiful, wow! secondly, you have a gift of writing from the cuff (or off the sleeve, if you prefer) about things which you have imagined or experienced but are not currently happening, but seem real because of the clarity and passion with which you write. i love fantasy pieces, many of mine are that very entity. you exhibit a deep loving heart and a wonderful gift here. awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much glad you enjoyed :)
Lovely picture first off, you are very beautiful. This dreamlike state just floats on the page, lulling me in a wonderful sense of warmth...there's more security than heat in this read, it's that feeling that only comes from trust and mutual admiration. Nicely pen'd Carolann...it's an amazing glimpse into perfect harmony.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frieda.
I just love the new pic of you...stunning, and this love poem just gave me butterflies...so romantic and loving. Gosh you're pretty...=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much David :)
Night

11 Years Ago

My pleasure really...=)
You dream quite well! A beautiful fantasy that you brought to life.
You're stunning in the photo - gorgeous smiling eyes. You do look as if you are in love!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Oh I wish lol but thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I saw the poetry in your face in the picture dear.
He must have been the one taking the photo as your expression is beaming! I fir one can never fake my expressions for pictures... Im amazed that others can "pose" so well.
This poem did not feel like a pose at all. Pure joy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you, though he is not real, just a figment of my imagination :-)
Wpww!!!

11 Years Ago

IT WAS A BEUTIFULL POEM!!! AND YOU LOOKED VERY TRIMENDOUS!!! GREAT JOB
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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