3rd side of a coin

this was an expirement I think it worked out pretty well :)

                I will

I will                        destroy you

I love you         yet

                              hate you

forgiven         those   

                            unforgivable sins

I need you

                               you left me

I trust     you     are

                              untrustworthy

want you    to(o)     go

                                die

my dear friend

                              I'll kill you

my only one     your

                           dead to me

You're gone     and

                          I'm numb

I can't live without      you

                                are part of me

can't forget you

                          are still near

this inside myself will destroy body

and will

                it will

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

please review :) thank you ok there are three ways you can read this (at least) the red side or the blue side with the black going both ways, or reading everything from left to right. enjoy :)

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Very elusive, and creative. Very nicely writen. Who knew of the 3rd side of something, I tend not to find to many sides, then it isn't a coin, it is a die. I like this one, very well expressed.

[Dorchadas]

I love the structure... it really drew me in... the conflicting emotions and intensity are almost manic ~smiles~ it's intoxicating...
I love your unreserved expression of emotion... your honesty shows real strength and passion ;)