an ode to friends

The image was not mine it was produced by FLCL

Remember when...

remember then...

going on a treasure hunt

half smoked cigaretts in dirty ashtrays

adventures to shows

I still have the scars

getting lost in frisco

I loved "thee parkside" bathrooms

talking for eight hours on the phone

I still haven't beaten 8:27:32

we we(')re the clyptomaniacs

salt from CJs

What about the bleachers

stairway to heaven

Those hours I spent talking you down

most bittersweet moments in my life

You invited me to swingdancing

my shoes will never be the same

I just met you but you're cool

you don't even know my name

so much time spent IMing

it's funny how you're closer than most

Watching the sun crawl out of his bed

time well wasted

Carrows late at night

or early in the morning

The time I spent with you

was time well wasted

Author's Note

It's really choppy this poem was for me really comment on it if you want.

Reviews

[Dorchadas]

wow... this is a lovely piece... I love the nostaligia and the imagery is really beautiful... it seems almost sad but happy at the same time... maybe it's the sentimentality... or maybe it's just me ~smiles~ beautiful write ;)

...and salt hmmm? I was always more a ketchup & mustard girl... oh and the odd ashtray ~laughs~

[Adela Muresan]

Nice.
I like it a lot because it's organization is rather unordinary, and coz of the use of phrases like these ,,Watching the sun crawl out of his bed
time well wasted,,.
Your conclusion ,,The time I spent with you
was time well wasted,, , is by far the best part of the poem- very touchy


A.M.