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compteplation

A Poem by carpe noctem

Tell me what to write

I'll write the world for you

who should I be?

i don't know any more

truth be told I am very lost.

I have so many personas

I cant find my personality

I write these words these passing thoughts

shallow words hallow words.

teach me tell me

how to feel

help me put my self back together

all I know is I don't want to be numb anymore.

I just want to live

until then

my only guidance is what you tell me

so common and let me know

should I stay or should go?

© 2008 carpe noctem


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Stay.
This is a lovely poem Z. Its has a beautiful vunerability to it.
I don't know that you realise the passion and intensity in your own writing.
You manage to transfer your most personal thoughts and emotions onto paper so effortlessly yet eloquently.
Never stop writing.
The only person who can show you the way is you. Trust & believe in yourself and then you'll find yourself ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 25, 2008