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another one of my venting poems, very low level of poetry, not very articulate, or deep.

Sometimes a person needs more

than just getting by

one can't live forever

just surviving

they need more soulice

than just getting high

 

When you're worn down to

tooth and bone

and can't go on another day

and you still stick with it

 

'en you're alone

in your mind

and can't see tomorrow

how it will ever come.

 

you're your own worst enemy

when you cause

all your pain

when you struggle to walk each step

not sure your even sane.

 

sometimes one needs more

when just enough is never enough

and you have no place called home

sometimes a person just needs more.

Author's Note

not a poem with intense work put behind it.

Reviews

[Dorchadas]

Maybe not... but it has alot of intense depth and thought behind it. I loved this Xain.