The Covalent Bond

The covalent bond
Her atoms
bind his electrons
to her.
His, attracted helplessly.
As moth to flame
Fish to water
Death to life.
Her food. His consumption.
Bound to each
Bound is she alone.
Bindings her sweet relief.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I love the allegory you use here and this fast moving electron of a piece simply wizzes down the page. I was however unsure of the concepts as 'he' is seen as fodder for her particles to absorb?

[Carson Kramer]

This is actually a piece, that has a BDSM theme. It's about attraction. Her bindings are not metaphorical.

[Carson Kramer]

And, thank you for such a kind review, John. I'm pleased you like it.
Cheers,
Carson

[Luna]

This is a sweet one. You were simple with it but it also had depth at the same time which can create a beautiful picture in ones mind. Very beautifully done. Good work :)

[Carson Kramer]

Thank you very much, Luna. I appreciate your thoughts. :)