This Moment Now

This Moment Now

A Poem by forfila

Its as if you can really see me
And in this moment, you free me
Lifted in an all knowing bliss

Drifting in the clouds, touched by their soft kiss
Listening to heart’s sounds
Gliding in light winds

Together we roam
As one we exist

 

© 2008 forfila


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I love the colors. I wonder why you ended in grey...
This piece is delicate and soft...like cashmere...


Posted 16 Years Ago


Absolutely lovely. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This has such a calming and spiritual feel. Its just so perfect but so simply written, few words that say so much. Blissful. Well done Matthew.

Posted 16 Years Ago


beautiful as always...
short, sweet and to the point...love it.

love you, amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh good one! :) i loved how it was like to souls coming together in the winds of life and existance, swirling around in the clouds, happy and kissing and all!
You capture these little moments well!:)
Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, this is a bit powerful Matt, deep and very meaningful, short, but extremely sweet. I like your phrasing here especially the image of the clouds soft kiss...soothing. You do have a way with words...
Helen :-))))

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful.
very deep...
yet very clear....
great write.

blessings....

-rupam

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 7, 2008

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Auckland, New Zealand



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