Now As One III  Free

Now As One III Free

A Poem by forfila
"

The third and final in this series between the amazing Claudia Garcia and myself.

"

We head through a wonderland of beauty, where the flora stays in bloom and the fauna is always in tune. Walking hand in hand, such a place, such a time to be, here we are as one, the way it should be.

The wind blows into our faces filling us with so much creativity. The flowers filled our nostrils with sweet aromas and the grass was soft between our toes.

With every feeling so right, in heaven with an angel by my side, there is but one thing  that keeps us feeling bound. I turn and say, "Angel?"

His voice so serious. I look into his eyes, "Yes?

"Do you feel like I?"

I grab his hand and smile, "Such a silly question to ask. You know I feel the same. What makes you think otherwise?"

"It is just, we are so happy, so sure and so content, but i feel like we are hiding something. Do you understand?"

I place a hand upon his cheek and smile, "Yes my love, I do understand."
Her smile ignites one of my own across my face. "I love you, I think we are ready to walk free."

I begin to unbutton my shirt, as I remove it from my body, I begin to show him the soul within.

I see her aura clense and eyes glow. Her skin is no longer my sin. I remove my rags covering my chest. I back into her eye contact for it is here I am now relaxed.

I have finished removing every piece of my clothing, I stand before this beautiful man bare to the bone. I am showing him that I am more than just name brand clothing, I am showing him that I am just his angel.

I watch on as she casts her clothes into the past of forgotten memories, I too am bare before this angel. I am so proud of her, so in love with her. I extend my hand to her.

I accept his hand without hesitation. He has opened up a whole new world to me, a world I was scared to explore. He has shown me what it is like to be free.

Together we have found the pleasure of basic and true purity. We walk, I turn, "Thank you Angel."

I turn to look into his gorgeous face, "No my love, thank you."

 

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll306/forfila/NowAsOne3-1.jpg%5b/IMG%5d


 
© 2008 Fallen Angel a.k.a Claudia Garcia


 

© 2008 forfila


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Naked in knowing... Thats what I sort of feel reading this sweet write you two... When you get to know people quite well and your guards have fallen down in a sense you do stand naked before eachothers eyes, and whats more it feels beautiful, about as beautiful as human form.. This is nice keep them comming. =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

A wonderful collaboration. Flows very well and hard to tell it is written by two people, which I think is the point of you collaborating. Job well done. :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautifuly written.

Lovely.

:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

246 Views
12 Reviews
Rating
Added on March 26, 2008
Last Updated on March 26, 2008

Author

forfila
forfila

Auckland, New Zealand



About
more..

Writing
Yet Yet

A Poem by forfila


The Meantime The Meantime

A Poem by forfila


Great Unkown Great Unkown

A Poem by forfila



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Now as One Now as One

A Poem by forfila