You

For my special one on her birthday

You

 

Breezes
blew in fates hands to make my dream

Across
oceans they flew for this tired heart to receive

Dear
lord,

Is
she a dream?

One
soulful and beautiful peach of pure passion to believe in

The
answer to my everything, fulfilled by this completion

These
blanket stars covering us

Making
near of an apparent far

Tides
of karma alive with hearts warmest will

Spells
inside wishes casting visions upon hopes of futures

Love
effortlessly reigning seamless in truly surrendered adore

Higher
orders persuasion morphing less into evermore

Now
washing over me

Clean
waters of honesty

Soaking
and cleansing me

This
river weightless and timeless

Holy
substance the soul breathes

The
power of you

The
purity and truth

My
match in love

I
bathe in your resplendence

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

By

 

Matthew Carter

 

 

Reviews

[John Moran]

The formatting is somewhat frustrating and the simplicity leaves the reader wanting more, but you succeed in proving your point. A decent write, but needs work to achieve its full potential.

[Bluet_Belle]

(superuberblush) I love the way you formated this. The way it reads now is perfec:P It flows well and it sounds great read aloud:) And once again my Heart skips, like a happy child, in the warm summer rain of YOU!:P I just love it(and iloveyoufeversamealsobatweh:P)

Beautiful write, i am honoured:) Its the second best birthday surprise ever:P(i am pretty sure you know the first one as well:P even if itwasnt particularly a surprise, and i am gonna end this review cause it should all be in a message instead of me gushing in a review box:P I feel a bit... i dont know:P i guess kind of conceited going on and on about a poem about yours truely and all that it makes me feel a bit too proud:P But thank youthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!! :P ILOVEYOU:P so its excused:P)

[QuietPoet]

this is beautiful. I enjoyed it.