Had & Sappy

Psalm 27:14

 

                                                                                 insipid are words                                                                                                                whereas all virtue was resigned

                                                                                      not a hasty lust 

                                   no unearned miracles, but a slighted design

                                bridging the plague between 

                                                                                     wine 

                                                                                              and 

                                                                                                     whine  

                          entertaining oneself with the ideas of life in 1595

                                                                                                               inscription of love

                                                                                                               a romantically bloody crime

                                                                                                               tapering physical distance                                                                                                                         where heavenly souls realign

                                                                                                               despite Shakespeare's absense

                                                                                                               this amores as equally sublime

                                    

Reviews

[Odayin]

Realign, sublime...just beautiful really.
I thought you had some really great key points in this one. It really made me think about life whilst I also thought about how wonderfully written this is.
So much meaning...presented in a gorgeous fashion, really...I just love it.
As for your authors note, even though you said you've failed miserably in one specific part, you're still a step ahead because not only are you aware that you've failed, you also have the pieces to put together the puzzling solution:)

[Somebrownnerd]

Interesting piece, I enjoyed the way it directed my eyes, and depicted your train of thought. Your author notes were... very revealing. I would give some answers to your questions, though they would be vague and feathered in ill-experienced diction. However, I will say that if you can't fix it, you will certainly find someone who can. Psychoanalyzing yourself can be rewarding at times, but it can also drive you mad.

[words of rooted design]

Indeed it has.

[Bats In The Belfry]

Your Authors Note could almost be a poem itself...as truth, confessions and self reflections are beautiful sentiments. Enjoyed your poem!

[Uroš D. Stojanov..]

Interesting format, but it fits amazingly! It's giving a lot of thought to understand it and it's great. Keep at the good work!

-Urosh

[Pax]

i really like the format...and the content...as for your authors note... there are many sides romance or should i say love... and i think you've already known that.. you just have to listen yourself carefully....and don't rush anything that should not be rush...life isnt perfect... you just have to fill the spaces that comes in and put every mistake and failure and solve it like a jigsaw...then you'll know...that's learning..
wonderful poem!

[Yheela]

I liked this very much, the text, that seems to fall apart in the middle, is wonderful and captivating.

[sierrasparks91]

This is really good, I have to say the way you wrote this i can actually understand what your trying to get across. Keep up the good work.

[Baby Ricochet]

There's nothing logical about romance. Great poem

[K-mo]

I love how you spaced the stanzas, it helps with the suspense and the rhyme scheme is great! wonderful write!

[Destinyxi]

oooo nice format, very nice indeed. That's what first caught my eye. Very interesting title too. Was a nice write! Keep it up