Why are you still with me?

Must appreciate the gift of love. Come rarely into a life.

Wife with child.

 

 

  Why are you still here with me?

 

 

Sometime you are so far away from me.

I see your sad eyes filled with fear and disappointment.

You lay your head into my chest. You asked. “Why are you still here with me? So many friends and lovers have left me. I can’t get anything right.”

I whispered we will be okay my love. If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.

I have learn keeping love and passion alive is the hardest part of a life. You must give and give with all your heart. Then accept the gift of love with thankfulness and praise.

I bring you to me. I tell  my beautiful lady we need to escape.

Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.

Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.

Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay.

I will hold you like you were my last wish. Take you home and love you like you were my only desire and dream.

All I know is you make me want to be alive.

I want to be with you and wish to be with you till my last breath.

                         Coyote

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist a old man. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Pax]

I really like your work, each of your work takes us to a journey of your life… to the struggles of life, happiness, friendship, love, war, and many more...
“ If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.”
~it shows how your love is true and ever passionate.
Wonderful work Mr. Cayote!

[Apatheia]

Awww this is so sweet. I really enjoyed it.

[Mia]

This is beautiful.
"Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.
Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.
Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay." There is so much magic here. To say to her, lets be happy and inlove tonight. we'll worry later. you have an amazing heart and it never ceses to amaze me.

[That_Girl]

The title has a typo "your" should be "you'

"Sometime you are so far away from me." Sometimes

"I have learn keeping love and passion" Learned

What a sweet, loving poem. Your emotions are pure and your words passionate.

"If you fall behind. I will wait for you." This is an amazing line... love it!

[Mia]

You mean learnt don’t you :)

[That_Girl]

No, it can go either way in this situation. I'm not British so I say learned in cases like this. If he wants to use 'learnt', that's fine. :)

[Mia]

I'm not British either, and I'm sorry if I seemed rude...I wasn't trying to be.

[That_Girl]

Not a problem at all. :) You didn't seem rude.

[Sagar Waingankar]

Awesome as the writer writes it! Keep on the good work!

[Kenaz]

A piece full of love and emotion. Like a letter imbued with special power. "If you fall behind. I will wait for you." Indeed true love that flows through the poem. By the way, you have an extra "r" in your title, but I don't see anything else.

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I love it ,coyote:)

[quinfinn]

you have told so many stories with your art and each one is more personal and compelling than the last...i don't know where to begin to tell you how deeply touched and how profoundly moved i am every time i read one of your poems
and i wouldn't even think to correct your grammatical errors because your writing
has strength enough on its own merit to stand proud (besides, i am not an editor,
that's what editors are for) ...this is a terrific write!

[Bewitching Sensations]

Had me in tears.. so touching.. i Know.. I know im soppy :)..

[Poetic Beauty]

Simply stunning and a true tale of how love should be.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Beautiful..!!!