I didn't know

Just words. Enjoy.

                         I didn't know

My September lover would heat up the coming days of Autumn of 1978. She promised me today only. We danced in a forbidden love hidden in the secret corner of a private room with silence dreams.

We opened doors we could not ever close. In the silence of the Germany early Winter. She released veils of places unknown where fearless lovers awaken wants that are bare and true.

Young love is delicate. The young hearts will venture into the splendor of love not knowing. You can capture love for a moment. Eternal love rarely appeared and when the young heart is drunk in love.

The walls of love is paper thin. I didn't know. You were my Winter love and my Spring heartbreak.

I still think of you. Us blazing into love, awakening a want that could never be fulfilled.

                            Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

how lovely I loved this.


Beautiful lines simply lovely.

''The walls of love is paper thin. I didn't know.
you were my winter love and my spring heartbreak''





Thank you for your kind review and
comments left on my page and for
this wonderful poem.




God bless. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Benita. I always enjoy your positive and hopeful poetry.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. Thank you well I am glad that they lift your spirits in those times it is needed I know it is way God Inspires me and I know is Gods poetry not mine Thank you. Benita

[Ana B.]

intense, full of loss and realisation of the loss.....beautifull , i loved reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ana. Old memories become less painful with time. Good to have in old age.

[Stonz P.]

This one is so heartfelt and pierces right through with the well described imagery... I also like the structure..

Thank you for sharing, Sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stonz. I appreciate the comment.

[Alex]

I love every line, especially~ 'you were my Winter love and my Spring heartbreak'- love the emotion tied with the seasons. Please continue with these poems, they're so captivating, I will read every single one! Kudos :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Valentine]

Aww, sometimes when given a chance even young love works out. My husband was my dearest friend before the love developed. The trick is not to ever give up on the possibility of love. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. When you are young. You don't know love will come rarely in along life. Took me 36 years to find my dear wife. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[RileyRedding]

This is lovely. It invokes so much about how we all interpret love. Is this style inspired by any poets specifically? It vaguely reminds me of someone. Keep up the great work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I read everyone. My favorite are Dryden, Ben Jonson and Jack London. I wish I wrote like them. Just a combination of many. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this was so beautifully written. A very amazing piece indeed. :-)

Kaze~

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kaze for the many comments. I do appreciate.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome, it was my pleasure. :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

What we didn't know then and know now. How many times have I wondered. Does he still think of me.? I think you may have answered my question with this piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Dark Tower]

Beautifully written. Very powerful read. Nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dark Tower for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Diana]

This is absolutely breathtaking. Part story, part poetry. I didn't know, quite the lead. "You were my Winter love and my Spring heartbreak." Sigh. Piercing immediacy.

[Diana]

For whatever reason my computer wouldn't let me put "I didn't know" into quotes above.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Diana for reading and the comment. I do appreciate the kind words.