Show me the way to love.

A poem written in 1979. Being young and hopeful is when we have no fear of disappointment.

                         Show me the way to love

I found her sitting alone on a Friday night.
Sipping a rum and coke.
I requested to sit with her.
She gave a half smile and told me.
"Seat is empty. I ain't much company tonight."

I sat with a sad blue eye beauty. Sitting alone at the Germany guesthaus.
Her long blond hair flowing down her back.
Leaning into a rum and coke like it was her last chance.

I bought her another drink.
I asked for her tale.
She smiled and whispered.
"Same old tale. Fell in love. Love was good. Then somehow the love
evaporated into the wind and nothing was left."

We went to the quiet lake near the guesthaus and sat together on the ground.
I told her. "Look at the moon. It is a liar moon. Almost full and complete. Make
people wish for things they can't have."

Her blue eyes seem to looked through me.
She asked. " Do we need love. Are words of love just gratitude for the gift
of sex?'

I took her hand. Raised her off the ground.
We walked in silence.
I told her. "Love can be a fool's game. Wasted words and wasted emotion
leave the heart to mourn for the desire of the body."

She asked did I work in the morning?
I told her I was free  till Monday.
She asked me to go home with her.
I told her. "If you like. You are so beautiful and sad. I don't want to add to
your burden."

She smiled. and told me.
"Sometime we need a friend. Someone to hold. You make me laugh and I need to
laugh tonight and tomorrow."

In the quiet of her bedroom. I caressed her face and hair. She asked did I need more?
I whispered. "We have time. You are tire and you need rest."
She fell asleep. I was thankful for her warm body near. I knew her pain and
didn't desire to use and run.

I awoke to the smell of coffee.
I went to her small kitchen.
She was smiling and content.
She thanks me for not taking advantage.

I went to her.
Put my arms around her.
She started to cry.

I whispered to her.
"Give me your loneliness.
Allow me to bring laughter back into your life.
Let me replace the sadness with good days.
Life can be hard. If we move slow and easy.
Love may come?

She looked outside to the summer sun.
Told me. "I feel your fear and sadness.
We are both lonely and sad.
I need your caress and hope.
Let's put the bad memories aside and try to create good days."

We sealed a dreamer's promise with a gentle kiss.

I told her. "Love is hard to maintain. We need to drink some good red wine.
Learn each other dreams. We need to dance and laugh. Let's have great conversations then allow the love to come at the proper pace. Passion last for a short time. Love need to last forever."

We left her apartment. Our hands together and fear and disappointment was escaping into the wind.

Hope and love was trying to rebirth.
I was thankful.
         
                           Coyote
                        summer 1979
 








 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Show me the way to love'
Coyote,
Hmmm.....ya sure this is not a poem which leads to a song and then a novel? It has a nice strong foundation. Hope for a lasting and strong relationship based on respect. No one taking advantage but simply the joy of discovery and the hope for the future. Nice one!
Bless you this beautiful Spring,
kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Kathy. Being in love with life, being in love with love. Our best days.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

An incredibly beautiful and moving piece. As a woman, this touched my heart deeply.

[Fran Marie]

beautifully expressed emotions spring forth within this lovely piece ~

Well donE!

[Art Freeman]

Wow...a champion piece...a tour de force of poetic prose...while reading...i was the man...i was the woman...i was the man taking the chance...saying all the right words that were really the right words...that came from the heart...i was the woman...hurt...needy...yet unsure...willing to trust again...willing to love again...i so touched by this couple...i have a sense that i may carry this imaginary encounter with me throughout my own quest for true love...

I went to her small kitchen.
She was smiling and content.
She thanks me for not taking advantage.

I went to her.
Put my arms around her.
She started to cry.

I whispered to her.
"Give me your loneliness.

that touched me so much...you were so able to touch right on the chord of vulnerability most of us are unwilling to express...can only "dream" of sharing with someone of the opposite sex...just a perfect write...bravo...and thank you...


aRt

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sigh..sometimes we catch the moment and go with it..well caught

[M.Babu]

"Look at the moon. It is a liar moon. Almost full and complete. Make
people wish for things they can't have." I especially enjoyed this line:)

"Give me your loneliness.
Allow me to bring laughter back into your life.
Let me replace the sadness with good days.
Life can be hard. If we move slow and easy.
Love may come?"
Powerful paragraph here. Touched me deeply this did. Just wonderful real emotion punctuated in this part. Very deep. Beautiful words and a great ending to a wonderful poem. You make it sound so easy here...if only this always happened...wouldn't we all just be happy.lucky? An excellent poem here...

[Cherrie Palmer]

wonderful poem full of love and a thirst to be one, but I am very sure that the man you are today could blow this piece out of the water. Because a thirsty man will still need a drink, but a soul who has been without will go after that drink with a total purpose and that makes him fearless as well. :)

[Judy Ponceby]

I am unable to add anything new I fear to these lovely reviews. Other than how very touching and kind...a beautiful hopeful gift to your readers. Thank you for sharing.

[Crayon]

This is so amazingly beautiful. "Give me your loneliness" That line just resonated with me. I loved it, everything about it. So amazing. 100/100

Oh, Coyote. This is my favorite. I hope I experience this.

Oh, Coyote. This is my favorite. I hope I experience this.