First love

Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

                      












             












 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978

Author's Note

A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

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A beautifully written poem, i too feel the same about my first love. your poem is so heartfelt every word i can relate too. Your very talented and i really enjoy reading your work :O)

[maryjaneuy]

I can relate. nobody forgets their first love, I suppose. and the usage of photo was nice that it made me feel like I was there. Though there were some grammatical errors, the flow and the message were great. (oh don't get me wrong. i'm not good at proofreading but I just noticed some) :)

[Vanesa Markovic]

Your poems could not come at a better time for me, and I love every image you pair with them. Wonderful work once again!

[CHRIS ANDES]

reminiscence is the only way to get back to the past
=]
nice poem

[Tomi]

"SWEET", that's what this piece is. Very emotional, simple and lovely.. Great piece sir!

[Sarah Jane]

I love how each poem of yours really has its own story set with characters and a picture for the setting. Their all very honest and open, the way poetry ought to be.
Now to this poem. I loved it. I think it describes what love would be for anyone and I enjoy how relatable your work is. Im not old enough to be looking back quite yet but when I do I hope I have similar memories as you:)

[darkness*star1985]

you always out done yourself again and again... always in enjoy your written work, words i can't speak to express how your poems make me feel, i dont think that there is not a one that i have read that i didnt like... keep up the beautiful work

Again very sweet. :) And honest as said in featured. :)

[Sethnicity]

in the words of Fiest... The Saddest part of a broken heart is not the ending as much as the start. You should start organizing this into a story! It's Got best Seller all over it!

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

This is so beautiful and heart warming. A very gentle rendition of how it feels to fall in love and feel more whole.