Rest in Me

Rest in Me

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

Rest in me
I'll rest in you 
Until the stars 
fade from the sky 

Make me yours 
I'll make you mine 
In love’s caress 
we shall abide 

Join with me
in a lover’s dance 
take me higher 
than the sun 

Spirit to spirit 
Soul to soul 
Two flesh 
becoming one

© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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Great to see you back in here, hope you've brought some sun along. Don't know how i missed this sweet as honey write. It's so much part of your character, personality... the urges, the charm and all.

It's also very much a start as you mean go on from you, this is lovely: '' Rest in me - I'll rest in you - Until the stars - fade from the sky.'

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

3 Months Ago

Yes I agree Emma, if only life would stop getting in the way
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

Laughed at that BUT very appropriate

Off and away for a while. Take care of yourself.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

3 Months Ago

You too Emma



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This is intimate and loving. Sweet and beautiful

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

3 Months Ago

Thank you, that’s lovely
Such a gentle romantic read. Great flow and visual with it. I very much liked what I read here.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

9 Months Ago

Thanks Chris
That's so beautiful , made me cry

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

9 Months Ago

Thank you 😊
This is so very good, I really enjoyed this write.
Very creative, love the imagery you write with.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Months Ago

Thanks so much
You did a great job by blending nature into the realities of human life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

1 Year Ago

Thanks Levi
Levi Levin

1 Year Ago

Your welcome
Great to see you back in here, hope you've brought some sun along. Don't know how i missed this sweet as honey write. It's so much part of your character, personality... the urges, the charm and all.

It's also very much a start as you mean go on from you, this is lovely: '' Rest in me - I'll rest in you - Until the stars - fade from the sky.'

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

3 Months Ago

Yes I agree Emma, if only life would stop getting in the way
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

Laughed at that BUT very appropriate

Off and away for a while. Take care of yourself.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

3 Months Ago

You too Emma
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SKY
That's so wonderful. Love has to be that way. Two souls turning into one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

1 Year Ago

Thanks Sky. Yes that’s a beautiful way of putting it
SKY

1 Year Ago

Your most welcome friend :)
Your short, but poignant write reminded me of these lines from a Bob Marley song;

“One love, one heart . . .
Let’s get together and feel all right”

Lovely piece – a lovely composition - :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Carolann Dowsett

1 Year Ago

Thank you I’m glad you like it.
I saw you were online thought id stop by. Nice to see you here again i myself havent been here much of late. Yours is the romantic heart i think unrequited

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

2 Years Ago

Life never really settles. I think we just have to write around it.
Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

Well you may be right about that. i guess i felt like it wasnt any fun to write here anymore. But it.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

2 Years Ago

Yes that I can understand. I’m writing more songs now than anything else. I guess we just have to .. read more
Simple as that but quite delightful too & certainly worthy of every one of the positive reviews that pre date my own contribution.....N

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

2 Years Ago

Thank you Neville

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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