Heat Rises

Heat Rises

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett
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At least I can dream :)

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I can hear the sound of his heart 
beating in his chest
It is the sound of life 
playing to its own individual beat and rhythm 

I hear the whisper of my name 
as it flows unbidden from his lips 
It floats across waves of sound 
until it settles into the deep parts of my soul
like a gentle kiss it touches me 
fills me with its warmth 

His love frees me
lifts me up and carries me 
upon winds of change 
into to a future 
I could never have dreamt of 

In his arms 
I am free 
Laughter fills my spirit 
and I overflow with joy 

Finally safe 
in the strong arms of love
I drift away 
on tides of passion 
that enthrall me 

I float upon moonbeams 
as his love penetrates my being
Encapsulating me in waves of delight
taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams 

I am alive in his love 
healed by his kisses
that dance with free abandon 
upon the softness of my skin 

Every cell in my body tingles 
in the beauty of his touch 
Heat rises 
pumping the blood of passion through my veins 

His love engulfs me 
and I melt into his burning flesh 
Melded together as one 
we ride upon waves of ecstasy 

Soaring higher and higher
with every beat of our hearts 
Until we reach a place 
beyond the highest stars  

Then the fire of our passion
burns to embers at last 
and we collapse 
content and at peace 
into the beautiful warmth 
of each others arms 


© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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Beautiful photo and a amazing poetry. Good to desire to dance in passion.
"Every cell in my body tingles
in the beauty of his touch
Heat rises
pumping the blood of passion through my veins "
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines were my favorite. Best poetry is about real love and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I re-read the poem. Photo is beautiful and the words are amazing.
Carolann Dowsett

8 Years Ago

Thank you 😊 Means a lot
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Nice poem and beautiful photo. Great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
' His love frees me ~ lifts me up and carries me ~ upon winds of change ~ into to a future ~ I could never have dreamt of '

Every stanza in your wonderfully love-oozing poem has its own magic formula but the one i quote is so full of hope in love, it moved me to leave a review, to let you know how much the warmth and vision seeps into public vision.into me. Beautiful. (You too, have similar hair but only that fair in the summer, darn it!)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much that's so nice of you to say. Mine goes a little darker in winter too :)
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MAC
what a beautiful love poem! amazing write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Inspiring and lovely. A fine read, as usual.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The magic of love and affection is on brilliant, full display here, captured in your words. Very nice work, indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Nice photo. You look like someone's mom. Like if a little kid looked at you they'd know they were safe. That's really beautiful. Nice poem too. Love's the biggest gamble most people will ever take.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Wow, great love poem; took us on a journey inspired by that love you feel; a very difficult thing to do in writing, at least for me. And it all bears honesty which makes it credible and a joy to read. This a great one here!
P.S: Nice pic! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Inda.
Beautifully written with Great word choices........Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed. :-)
This is a profoundly hopeful and spiritual poem, a hymn, a psalm and song to love on every quantum level .. It was a real pleasure to read and you look so radiant and confident as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Richard.
sensual, beautifully written. Love the picture of you. I have used my own a few times with poems and wondered if I should have. You put my mind to rest. Lovely work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I did think twice about it but then thought what the heck :-)

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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