Whenever....

Whenever the wind caresses me

I feel your breath

whispering my name.

 

Whenever I smell a rose

I feel your scent

warming my soul.

 

Whenever the rain drops fall

I feel your touch

charting my body.

 

Whenever the sun shines above

I feel your heat

smouldering my heart.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

The title "Whenever" is unique. The usage of words with "Whenever"'s brilliant. I liked the concept what it says. Lovely poem, Catlen ... once again you did a nice work. Keep writing.

[Chris]

this one is just...dear. It feels well behind the eyes.

[annabellee]

This is gorgeous, really. Great imagery. I especially loved the first stanza. Enjoyed it a lot :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A wonderful poem, Catlen. This is a nice one which should be read by anybody, so for me it's not that sensual to be rated mature. LOL. I know a teacher always make it sure to be wholesome at all times.

Nice use of anaphora. I like your 3-liner verses. Keep writing.

[Catlen]

thank you very much