Muse, Forgotten

My eyes commanded

an oath of

you to obey and please.

My body felt

an urge to

respond to you with ease.

My heart opened

a door to

let in your eager tease.

My soul suffered

a loss as

you let your bond release.

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

Isn't this so indicative of how relationship (in general) are? The rise then fall. I enjoyed the descriptive nature of this piece.
Thank you for sharing.

[Pete]

Reminds me of Tennyson, "Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all." Opening your heart is always a risk. Great job.

[Catlen]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Such a perilous venture, this game of love. Whether it brings ecstasy or a suffering soul, we must go there. Very nice, sensitive writing, Catherine.

[Catlen]

Thank you Sam! Nice seeing you again! :)

[JR Darewood]

I love your rhymes-- they're incredibly natural

[Sami Khalil]

An awesome poem. Speechless...:).................

[Catlen]

Thank you. I never expected the word "Speechless" to be used as a comment for my poems. I am honoured.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any pleasure...:).............

[EdgarLovecraft]

Great poem 5 stars I'm a big fan of mythology.

[Catlen]

Thank you!

[A. Amos]

My soul suffered
a loss as
you let your bond release.

Last verses I felt take you deep in your thoughts. good job and thanks for posting

[Catlen]

Thank you!

[emmajoy]

A wonderful build-up to such a sad finish. Finely constructed, Catlen. Your English is superb!

[Catlen]

Thank you!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"My soul suffered
a loss as
you let your bond release."

The poem is concise yet created a complete picture of bittersweet memories. The bond at the end was broken... So moving.

[Catlen]

Thank you :))))))

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome, Catlen.

[Antoñyo]

Beautiful and smooth is the flow and feel of this despite the sadness...
A powerful piece!

Thanks for the [100/100] share

[Catlen]

Thank you :))))))))