In the Dark

It a story you just have to figure out but it based on fears

                  In the dark anything can happen

                You can’t see anything around you

         Darkness surrounds you getting closer & closer                   From a distance you can only hear the horrible scream

        Saying, “HELP, HELP SOMEONE SAVE ME!

 

              You can feel the cold wind claw at your skin                                       The rain stinging your fragile skin like a thousand angry bee’s                     

Faster you keep walking though the dark, sensing danger is near

 Then you feel hands snake around your body

   Then thrown against the cold brick wall

   Pain seeps though your body numbing all your muscle

  Keeping you from running away           

Try to scream but your mouth is to dry and out came out as a squeak              GET UP, GET UP you say to your self but your body is too frighten to move            PLEASE, PLEASE DON’T HURT ME but it came out weak

When you look up all you can see is a menacing eyes looking down at you

        The shadow claw at your clothes and takes your soul

 

The freezing rain stings at you bare skin making you shiver from the cold

A cold round circle goes’ to your head clicking the trigger back

 BANG, BANG silence surrounds you, just darkness

Memories of the people you love pass by you                                                 Even the memories of the horrible thing you done

Then you see a light and you tell your self it time to go

  Good Bye you say one last time and disappear

                                                                                                                    that why “In the Dark” anything can happen

 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy i think.......

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Fascinating really. i love the darkness and the way you make fears come alive. I can feel it and relate so well. This is good. Great write.

[V.J.C.]

Seeing as i some times read and write darker material for the novels i am working on i find this intriguing, thanks for sharing this.

[Tony Williams]

I like it. You did a very good job of making a "fast-paced" rhythm. My only real nit-pick is the formatting. I don't know if there is an artistic angle I'm missing or something, but it threw the rhythm off a bit. Also, creepy is good sometimes.

[Celestrial-Demon]

....it creep me out should of make it friendlier