Someone Who Loved Too Much

I don't know...just something that I literally just wrote down..no planning at all x.x

His hand touches her lower back

Ever so slightly

Sending shivers down her spine

A wave of happiness flows through her

His presence creating an ethereal land

She feels as if she is lost in this moment

The sparkle in her eyes

The dimples in her rosey cheeks as she smiles

The little giggle that escapes her lips

It almost feels unreal

She gazes into his eyes seeing the glistening blue orbs

She smiles once more and puts her hand on his neck

Bites her lip, leans in for a gentle peck

As their lips touch, a spark ignites

Then it all disappeared

All gone

The beautiful world she was once in has now caved in...

Crashed down...

Leaving her isolated...

She cared too much

Let down her guard too much

And now...

She hurts soo much...

Reviews

[Just Kim]

She cared too much
Let down her guard too much
And now...

She hurts soo much...

I know this feeling here oh so much, I can feel the emotions through out this piece.

[A. Amos]

my friend a lot of work going in this piece, very interesting read and last line was killer for me. Great work

[Celine]

Thanks! (= I just randomly started typing x_x I try x_X

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome