End of the peak

Falling

tumbling

feel the breeze before me

dropping

fast

towards the dark abyss

staring

crying

as the light gradually gets smaller

weak

soundless

my life is burning up

fading

whispering

my presence before you wasn't enough

leaving

sadness

was that all i had

burn

scream

my eyes have seen all

crash

cold

the floor is wet

dripping

gentle

i wonder who comes next

sound

asleep

rest until the day sets at last

Author's Note

Opinions i have no idea what happened here haha

Reviews

[DeNix]

I like how you don't need any big words to describre your feelings and thoughts, really like it

[CrimsonShinigami]

Thank you very much

[Richard Helbert]

i like this i like the way the simple use of words conveyed a deeper message very nice

[CrimsonShinigami]

Thank you very much