Pieces

scattered

salt            and

                                sunshine

love

           in the

    r

      a

   i

     n

 

why    is    it

                                      some memories

   bring so much

                          pain

 

 

 

 

it's all okay

                             then I think

 

    of  you

 

roses

          and     

                  tears

 

                         breaking                    into-

 

 

 

and it all

                 f

              a

              l

              l

             s

                                             a   p   a   r   t

 

flowers    in          spring

                                      l   ea  v  es   

                           in the

                                                            fall

   my favorite

                  things

 

 

 

i'm finally happy!

                           ...then I think

           of   you

        and I'm

                           

                            breaking     

                                                into-

 

 

Author's Note

Yeah... I was bored and got a little crazy with this one. Feel free to yell at me.

Reviews

[Ry]

I think that the craziness adds spark. Without the craziness and the italics and boldness and what not, the poem would probably just be a few words--average. I won't yell at you for that one. Good job =) -Eli