Broken Together

Broken Together

A Poem by Chaz Hemsworth
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A poem about the relationship between me and my girlfriend. We both have had struggles with depression.

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 The jagged edges of her soul

like broken glass stabbing

into my heart

and its stony shell

 

I bleed feeling

cutting myself on the on the shards

of my mind

 

I hold  them up to her

She holds up her notched pieces in return

 

And we glue them together.

© 2014 Chaz Hemsworth


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what an intense sad story of two broken entities coming together as one, well written and very well expressed chazzy..thumbs up to you. havent been online for a long while so late reviews all round

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is actually a very interesting poem that's quite thought provoking and gives the reader a very clear sense of romance and despair blended together. Very good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is actually a very interesting poem that's quite thought provoking and gives the reader a very clear sense of romance and despair blended together. Very good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awh, that is sad but at the time sweet... You guys glue each other back together, so sweet!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chaz Hemsworth

9 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting! It is really sweet I think.

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My name is *Chaz Hemsworth*. It's not really, but let's go with that. I'm 16 at the moment.My favorite author is probably Poe. I also like Sci-fi and fantasy. Because of the Poe influence, I t.. more..

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