remain true

remain true

A Poem by Cherrie
"

life and death

"

The fleeting breath of the dying and

the fervent cries from the new

they are one in the same.

Only time sets them apart

 just as Moon and Sun share

 

the morning sky so do they

share a part in who we are.

Let both of their lives

Shine down upon our steps

and let those steps

remain true.

© 2013 Cherrie


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thanks for sharing this deep philosphical take on life, death and orbital connectedness...

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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The Sun and the Moon are both powerful forces in nature as well as in human nature. Wonderful write. :)

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Cherrie

12 Years Ago

good morning, and thank you Mark
Mark

12 Years Ago

Any time hon! One of the reasons I take walks is to find some natural place, with plants and trees, .. read more
Cherrie

12 Years Ago

i agree walks with nature always inspires

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Cherrie
Cherrie

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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