Winter's Call

Winter's Call

A Story by Cherrie
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a winter morning

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Burning fingers reel in agony as the winds path leaves strikes of pain across my face and eyes. A plummeting wind chill steals my breath and in the distance I can see a shelter. A mere lean-to no door no heat but mostly no wind. I steady my steps and set my mind to the task at hand.  I will myself to move forward and with each step I tell myself “You are almost there,” and with each step my body screams, “Stop the pain!” I am starting to feel unbalanced my feet have grown numb and feel like a lead weight.  I’m not sure how many more steps it will take me to reach my goal, but my fear is it will be one to many.  

 

The simplest of things help, in such poor conditions. I close my eyes to block the wind and immediately feel a bit better.  A small rest would do me good as I fight against winter's call. I could dream of hot cocoa and a crackling fire.  My legs have joined the ranks of my feet and they too are numb my time is short and I reflect back on my life and picture those I leave behind….and the wind carries a cry on it's wings.

 

“Megan!  Megan Parker, get up out the snow drift and come on! Before we miss the school bus!” Mia, her big sister yells across the park.

 

"Okay, I'm coming, wait for me."... and in the distance the beast follows-

© 2012 Cherrie


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Cherrie
a little winter humor

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wow, great surprise ending.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good one..!!!

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Indeed an unexpected ending, this write had such a flow that the last lines shake you out of it. When one has the gift to do that to readers through words, he most definately deserves praise. Well done, I enjoyed this one very much!

Arianna

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Posted 13 Years Ago


That was funny... love the ending twist... kids do have the greatest imaginations because they are still untainted.

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Wow! you got me on that ending...wasnt expecting that at all.
What a wonderful chillin piece, enjoyed the winter humor.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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welcome to minessota...winter will really humor you...hi Cherrie

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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hey, I say let's call it a "snow day" and stay home. The Beast gets bored at school.

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Cherrie
Cherrie

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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