Think of a Pain

This inanimate object

is inside my head.

It won't leave me alone.

 

I offer is everything I have.

But it rathers to bother me,

calling my name.

 

Its voice is a soothing kind.

With a rough finish.

 

It's peaceful to listen to.

But evil things it says.

 

It's repitition of annoyance,

gives me a headache.

I try to ignore it.

 

It's scratching away

at my brain and skull.

It hurts just at the thought of it.

 

The ignorance within such a thing,

gives me pain others can't imagine.

 

I'm the only one.

No-one else ever complains

about the whining of a person

hiding in a small place

in their own imaginary wonders.

 

The screeching of a bullet sounds,

and, like that,

the unknown subject is gone.

 

Slowly, my mind eases back to normal.

Wondering if it was real,

or only a voice of my cruel imagination.

Reviews

[Sagar Waingankar]

So sticky you are with your emotions! You won't leave them so easily when they try to reside by your side! Words attack brutally as it may have screwed up your mind! Yet they remain unanswered as it plays through their own kind!

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Barnie14]

welcome!

[Richard Lane]

this is very well written i like this poem very much.

[Chesney W.]

thank you very much

[Barnie14]

really good!

[Chesney W.]

thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Those person hiding in secret places are hard to control. A very interesting poem. The voices can lead us to good and bad place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

ur welcome, and thank you for reviewing.

[Hamza]

sometimes imaginations seem more painful than reality ..
but then they're just imaginations ...

and the words.. i could feel them ...
do share what this inanimate something is if you find out .. :)

[Chesney W.]

haha,, if I ever figure out what it is, I'll let you know... thanks for the review!

[ObscurityNone]

I am really enjoying your writing. I finally find someone who is not "churching" up their writing with unecessary language and imagery, but a clear and to the point, honest, and self-expressive view. I will point out that a few of the first lines could use some corrections as far as grammar goes.

[Chesney W.]

thanks