Always almost.

Mistaken.

Misunderstood.

 

Unwritten.

Unspoken.

 

Lying without a cause.

Denying without a reason.

 

Breaking the unbreakable.

 

Setting fire to the most flammable.

 

Growing into a new person.

 

No recognizing what I see in the mirror.

 

Widowed without a husband.

 

Set out to die alone.

 

Starving for a feeling I'll never feel.

 

Cutting just to know I'm real.

 

Craving attention of all kinds.

 

Aching without physical pain.

 

Not knowing what comes next.

 

Futuristic intelligence.

 

Loving a foreign drug.

 

Angry for what has happened.

 

Watching Angels fly to heaven.

 

Scared I'll be forgotten about.

 

Left for dead in prison.

 

Leaving with no goodbyes.

 

Crying myself into a disguise.

Reviews

[Malcolm J. Watt]

Now this captures the angst of this late age we share. Excellent language. thanks

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

You shouldn't let other people tell you who to be. Be who you are and don't worry about what other people think. Everyone will have their own opinion of you, it's up to you to rely on yourself and your own opinion. The only opinion that matters is truly your own. People will worry about you and say you have changed, it's up to you to just be yourself, no matter what they say. Live your life how you want, not how others tell you to.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[I'm Just me:)]

well....i guess all i gotta say is why do you feel this way.........its a great write but with passion like this there should be reasoning

[Chesney W.]

life sucks, with the bullying at school, and then I go home to deal with my family bullying me because they don't like who I've become, or something like that. There are not many people who like me for me, so I feel alone all the time, and the pain I feel onthe inside, it hurts more than any physical pain ever could..

[I'm Just me:)]

well i guess all i can say is why did you change???

Powerful... I can't describe it any other way...

[yusuf]

I like this one . you just revealed that much which kept the reader intrigued ,and by the last line i was left with a sense to know more!

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story in the poem. I wanted to know more. The short statements made the reader think and ponder. A separation without a goodbye will leave you yearning for a friend voice forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

thank you for the review

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Great piece. I'm gunna go sit in a corner and rock back and forth now...

[Chesney W.]

thank you,, and okay?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Cracking piece, captures broken essence superbly....

[Chesney W.]

thank you