Don't Go

Your voice is amazing,

Like my favorite song.

Your name tastes so sweet,

I'll say it all night long.

 

Stuck in my head,

That's what you are.

Like a fantastic movie,

And you're the star.

 

Don't go,

Don't leave.

Stay here,

With me.

 

I love you.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Are you serious?...................

[Chesney W.]

When I wrote this I was serious... that relationship ended, sadly, but it ended happily, no fighting, just aggreement

[Aehr]

Two words: SO SWEET!!!
:D

[Malcolm J. Watt]

I'll be damned. If only she had said that is the story of many a man. Thanks for saying it like that.

[trainwreck]

Short and sweet. I really liked it. Good job!

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[pasdepoisson]

Simple, but very effective. I like that you don't have to try to make your verse flowery to create moving verse.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly sweet!

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww i'm speechless.
Good job and keep it up

[Chesney W.]

Thank you, glad you liked it.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem

[I'm Just me:)]

awwww haha tooo sweet ;)

[Chesney W.]

Thanks Bestest Pal!!!! you know who this is for(;

[I'm Just me:)]

yes ma'am!!(:

[Chesney W.]

yyyyyeaaaaaa((: I got to listen to angels talk yesterday on the phone

[I'm Just me:)]

awwwwwwww!:)

[Chesney W.]

yea((:

[beccagarcia]

beautifullly written

[Chesney W.]

Thank You(:

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...:)

[Chesney W.]

Thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)