Angelic Voices

Angelic voices echo inside my mind,

I smile.

 

A remembrance of what was said,

the mutual feelings building up.

 

The butterflies in your tummy,

I can cure them.

 

Your picture is the image that I see when I close my eyes.

Your voice softly sings me to sleep.

 

Your touch is what I can't wait for,

Your warm embrace.

 

I blush at the thought of you being here,

I feel a small tingle.

 

I dream of your presence.

I dream that we are forever together.

 

That's what I want. Us, forever.

 

Reviews

[yusuf]

Very Smooth. Nice. :)

[pasdepoisson]

Here's to hoping the memories will always be fond! For me, it's like finding a memento of a girlfriend long separated, but warmly remembered.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A perfect portrayl of fight or flight! well done, good read.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[trainwreck]

Your last line really summarized the entire poem quite nicely. I like the imagery and the obvious love and passion. Good job. :)

[Chesney W.]

Thank you for reviewing my work and thank you for the kind words..i appreciate it very much

[beccagarcia]

I lovee thiss piece Chey!!

[Chesney W.]

I'm happy you do((:

[Ohhhwillow]

Your concept here is beautiful. Nostalgia and dreams are powerful, and often we find ourselves living as much in moments past and yet to come as we do the present.. Perhaps ever more. It's important to live in the here and now, from experience wishing and dwelling is mentally harmful. However still worth while, as you exemplify by writing this piece! I noticed "butterfly's" should be "butterflies", and your use of "it", should probably be "them", science butterflies are plural. Be careful with that, as your chosen flow may lead to distinctions in tenses or grammar. Just a little help, however you are doing wonderfully. This is nice :)

[Chesney W.]

thank you(:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of need and desire. I like the description of hope and wanting. I like the way you led the reader to the good ending. Forever is a long time. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

Thank you for reviewing my work.

[sithlordjp]

beautiful. You captured in your precise words the anticipation, the longing, the love. Well written, thanks for sharing!

[Chesney W.]

Thank you for reviewing!