the Lonely...

It's black, like night.

 

It's eating away at my heart.

 

It has made me sad.

 

Now I feel as if there is no-one.

 

I used to be so happy,

but now it's only sorrow.

 

Broken.

I think I've been broken too many times.

 

That light that I used to see,

when i used to hope someone could see me,

it's gone now.

 

I'm all alone.

lost hope.

ready to give up.

 

That cage they put me in keeps growing smaller.

and it's crushing me.

 

i bleed out my pain,

or atleast i try to.

 

But nothing happens

because I still feel the same.

 

I'm so different.

I used to be e burst of energy.

but all that I am now is a walking, talking PAIN!

 

I'm always hurtung,

I'm always hurting others.

So how am I not a pain?

 

So alone in this world,

with no-one to understand...

 

The Lonely.

Author's Note

i don't know why i feel so alone....i just do...and it hurts, really bad......

Reviews

[Sam]

Wow I definitely liked your poem! It was well written and I like the meaning.
One thing though, didn't you mean (a) in line 22?
Other then that is was really good!

[♥ Kinnixk]

I understand; I used to feel that way a lot :( trust me, try to forget the guy who did that to you and it gets better. It actually does :)