Breathe Me

Just a poem.

Blue lips; slow veins

Heart beat grandfather clock

Frozen strokes to shiver

Breathe me visible

 

Pink lips; tender veins

Tongue feed honeysuckle sweet

Your warm smell infestation

A breath on my cheek and lips

 

Red lips; burning veins

My inside eyes are lovely

Whisper the art of yours

Dream big for me

Author's Note

Thanks for reading...mature only?

Reviews

[FlawedByDesign]

I love how you've gone from cold to hot in colour and feeling. It starts off slow, but then builds up in intensity, just to lay it down softly with the words,
"Dream big for me"

The line, "Whisper the art of yours", appeals to me quite a bit.

Nicely done.

[Crowley]

Not mature.....everyone should enjioy this one even though it has a great sensuality. Nice tight writing here, I could see my breath in the first stanza and took off my jacked for the third. Nice images and the pace is to die for. Loved it.