hurts

I smile cuz it hurts
As the tears graze the corners of my eyes
I smile
Its terrifying but still I smile
The reality of my unreciprocated care
Seeping in slowly to my ever fantasizing mind
My lips find the corners of my face
The heat of my emotions embalms my body
And I'm thinking
Everything at the same time but nothing in particular.
They've stayed in so much so I thought they were gone
In a fraction of a second these emotions burst out and
im crazy again
Showing joy in my misery
Because Im not numb
Because I care
Because these tears are real
These thoughts are real
Those memories are real
Because I'm strong
And I know its not wrong
To love in a world where there's so much hate.

Reviews

[Kreative Kana]

This has so many feelings put into it. Good job.
"Everything thing at the same time but nothing in particular."
I think you meant, "Everything at the same time but nothing in particular."
Thanks for sharing!

[Level-headed]

Thanks alot. Seen and corrected

[Kreative Kana]

No problem! :)

[Kreative Kana]

Thank you for joining my group.

[Philip Muls]

Proud to love and to care, even if unreciprocated. Strong poem. Very authentic.

Well done. Could you read mine.

[Level-headed]

Thanks alot. I'll definitely check yours out