Waking from the dream

A short poem of love fulfilled

        

 

A dream I had so long ago

as I upon the fallow ground

lay watching wisps of vaporous cloud

drift slowly across the sky

and I cannot forget the dream

no matter how long ago it was

that dream today it has come true

Now I am standing here with you.

 

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

good job! def has beauty within the lines.

[Literature Writer]

Very beautiful. This poem is as vivid as your other poems. Great job.

[deeps]

This is wonderful
I really like this
Very poetic

[Emily B]

hey, this is great, I wonder why there are no reviews . . . I like the way the lines trip along. Such a lovely lyrical rhythm.

last line should be here with you, darlin.