What Do You Do

What Do You Do

A Poem by Missing Part

What do you do when the tears don't stop falling,

and the pain doesn't go away,

and you don't know what the hell is happening,

when the turns into frustration,

and frustration turns into anger,

and you just can't take it any longer,

do you just give up, or do you keep fighting?

Can you keep fighting the tears, frustration, anger, and pain? 

Because I don't know if i can.

CMS(H)

 

© 2010 Missing Part


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thanks for the reasuring thought

Posted 14 Years Ago


Stay strong, tough times wont last forever.. I gave you a promise that I will not let down, I will come back for you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Tear are our way to release the pain of the heart. We must mourn so we can move on. Poem description and story was strong and you told a story of pain and heart brake. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the emotion that can be gleaned from this poem. it's strong and pretty clear (in my eyes) of exactly how you are feeling. Since i like people who are foward and blunt, i instantly like you. Haha. Thanks for sharing this with the world :)

Nick

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Missing Part
Missing Part

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